J. Haux

Hey, nice! Great contrasts with your shading. :D I hope you can find a way to smooth out the background...All the pencil lines show up. But I know you haven't ...

I confess: I'm a rereader. There is more to books than how it ends. Sometimes when I reread, I see it differently: I learn something different. I might see forshadowing ...

Im just spamming the art board arent I? Nah. You're...teaching? :D What's dodge and burn?

My only major critique is her...right eye. Even though it's in shadow, it needs dimension. Otherwise it looks like there isn't an eye there. Oh, it looks like her, definately! ...

the middle child of a family...doesn't receive the attention it deserves. Not so, Jessie! Not so! That's neat, Z! :D

Really cool!!! I'm glad I saw this. The detail and the shading...and the mood you captured. *contented sigh* It's not often you see that. Aren't you happy with it? :D ...

The eyes are beautiful, as is her expression! Nice! Others have seen it: the area you could most improve in is shading. In addition to what they said, try to ...

I'm sorry, could you please explain what it is you did? Then I can appreciate it more. :D

Thanks for the picture. Now I can see how it resembles the picture. Congrads on the shading in the eyes. Very nice. I"m reluctant to give a critique, as I'm ...

You should be happy with it--sure--and if you're satisfied with it, then good. You know what you need to work on, but I'm going to talk about it anyway. Sorry. ...

*laugh* I especially like the one guy's expression at the end--the Grim Reaper. :D

Oh no! I think you should have kept some of the stars! I liked them. What are you using to make these?

I could maybe give suggestions if I saw the picture you looked at, if you'd like any. It's a good drawing, but it doesn't really look like her. Still...she looks ...

*reads Anair's post* You obviously haven't read all of it... :-# I think part of the reason I was disappointed in Eldest was because I had forseen much of it. ...

You did compare them. You said they were both brilliantly written. I don't think they are on the same level, thought-wise. Inheritance? I guess we're looking at it differently, Zel. ...